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I wanted to do a new drawing for the Spidey fan club
 (and you guys of course=]) So here we go=]Took me the free time i had during the weekend and this morning to finish. Buildings are NOT easy to color. PLEASE critique this. be as detailed as possible, what you like what you DON'T like, please..... it's the only way I can get better. Pencils [link] Inks [link] edit : someone made mention of the confusing light source so I mucked with that, and then I wanted to ad a light source to the tree to help make it look more vibrant, so here ya go=] Comments
 This is looking really good man. I think if you made the webbing a bit darker it might help it to really pop.
 brilliant as always!
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Arms, Torso, coloring, shading and highlights Could be better (and these are really somewhat minor quibbles): - Spidey's right leg doesn't quite line up correctly with the position of his knee (it's as if his leg is turned one way and the knee is turned another). This may just be because of the rather large outward bump showing on his outer calf muscle. - On his left leg, the upper end of his thigh (as it flows into the hip area) seems rather small in comparison to the lower part of his thigh (as it joins the knee) - Lastly, his left knee gives the impression of his having 2 kneecaps Overall: Great piece   only thing I would change is Spidey's left eye . he wears a mask, so the indentation is too extreme. Put a sock over your hand see how it stretches over the blank spaces between your fingers. That's what is missing with the mask here.
Building look great, almost too great. The character is the focus in pin up art. -- Make an effort not an excuse  The Graffiti Dojo : Be Triple X TGD-BXXX  The colors are well executed. I especially like how the receding buildings are blurred out slightly. My only criticism is the actual drawing of spiderman. And to provide a propper critique I'd have to print it out and do a John Madden. If I can get around to it I will. Other than that I was always a fan of John Romitas Spidereyes.
-- MAJESTIC-XII Issue #1 is available at the super low price of 99 cents at [link] WARNING: FOR MAJIC EYES ONLY!  I don't see anything wrong with it. It looks great.
-- Eat well, Stay fit, Die anyway. saber4734 What can I say. I fell in love from the moment that I saw him. This drawing is absolutely amazing. You did a super job, the coloring, detail, composition and layering is so great! Your hard work at coloring this for I dont know how many days really shows how much of a great artist you are.
blah lol I actually had it darker and made it lighter for some reason... sad thing is i don't remember why and didn't save the mask
 isn't it bad when you make a decision, and can't back it up (makes ya feel a lil DE DE DEE.....)Glad you like it though=]-- progress is living..... - Javier Cruz Winnik .....just keep swimming, just keep swimming *bow* as always? very nice comment=]
-- progress is living..... - Javier Cruz Winnik .....just keep swimming, just keep swimming |
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